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Dear
Direct Marketing Friend,
Let me give you some new marketing tips to increase your
leads and sales…
In this
issue…
Direct mail reality check
When I write or critique a direct mail program, I find it
helpful to follow tested and proven copy formulas to create a
winning campaign. You should check your direct mail now and
see if they match any of these response-boosting
guidelines.
For now, let’s take a look at just 2 useful
copywriting formulas…
- AIDA: Attention, Interest,
Desire, Action. It works because it
keeps you focused on the final goal: Prompting your reader
to act.
- Grab
attention with a personal, benefit-driven
headline.
- Now that you’ve got their
attention, what you say next is critical. You must create
interest to keep them reading. Help them
quickly identify that your message is relevant.
- To build
desire, use your strongest benefit-driven
selling points to appeal to your prospects’ needs and
wants.
- Get that response with a
strong call to action. Clearly state what
you want your prospects to do. For example: “Call
1-800-XXX-XXXX to get your free recession-fighting report”
or “Return this Special Savings Certificate in the
postage-paid envelope today to begin your FREE no-risk,
30-day trial.”
- AIDPPC: Attention, Interest,
Description, Persuasion, Proof, Close. This variation on
AIDA was developed by copywriting great Robert Collier,
outlining his take on a winning formula.
- After you’ve got
attention and interest,
your curious prospect will want a full
description of what you’re offering. This
is like the bait. Show your readers how this offer will
improve their lives, and…
- Persuasion
goes beyond simply presenting interesting information. You
must convince prospects that it’s in their best interest
to respond to your offer.
- After you’ve made your
claims, provide proof. Today’s skeptical
prospects demand that you prove your statements. Back up
your sales pitch with cold, hard facts and testimonials.
- Close.
Summarize the benefits and the offer and pair that with
your call to action. If you’ve done it right, you’ll be on
your way to a sales boost.
Mr. Collier used this primarily for the development of
sales letters, which we discussed in our last issue. (Click here to read the
article.)
If your marketing doesn’t measure up to these
response-boosting formulas, you’re losing leads and sales. If
you’d like me to help you get better results, email me at craig@cdmginc.com or call me at
310-212-5727.
Stay tuned for more formulas in our next full issue of
Direct Marketing Update.
Recession survival tip: Build real value into
your loyalty program
This recession has launched price wars in some industries
(like the airlines, for example). Many other businesses are
suffering from dramatic cuts in consumer spending. Many more
struggle with declining brand loyalty to others.
But there are some smart marketers out there who are still
finding ways to compete.
Loyalty programs have been one of the most successful
tactics. For example, although Talbots Inc. has faced trouble
with some brands in this economy, its Talbots Classic Awards
program could be a bright spot.
The program helped significantly increase spending on the
store’s branded credit card. In 2000, it was responsible for
28% of total sales—a number that grew as the program took off,
reaching 46% by 2008. Now, the company is launching a new
tiered program to increase customer engagement and gather more
data on its members.
U.S. households have an average of 14.1 loyalty memberships
but are only active in about half of those. This proves that
you have to do more than get a sign-up—you have to offer
rewards that are actually valuable and somewhat attainable to
your customer.
If you don’t have a clue about how to start a loyalty
program, the first step is to decide how many dollars must be
spent to receive a percentage-off coupon or a flat discount.
You can simplify the bookkeeping by awarding 1 point per
dollar spent.
Learn more about loyalty programs (and what you can learn
from your program’s members) in my next issue of
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subscriber? Click here to sign up now.
Web strategy: The world’s easiest upsell
strategy—that actually works
If you want to boost your average ticket sale—and, really,
who doesn’t—you need to use this easy upsell strategy on your
shopping cart.
The easiest upsell strategy you’ll ever find is
this…Structure your offer into three parts: Best Deal, Great
Deal and Good Deal.
Take a look at this example:
Another easy fix is to add the word “Recommended” next to
your Best Deal or paired with other products that you want to
highlight. My testing has shown that people respond to this
one powerful word.
Take a look at this next example on the right, which is
from a website for motorcycle enthusiasts. This screen shot
was taken from the women’s apparel page, where shoppers will
see a sidebar of recommended products like this.
So much of your online sales success is dictated by the
shopping cart. If you’re a regular Direct
Marketing Update reader, you probably already
know that streamlining your checkout process will give you a
significant sales boost.
But if your checkout takes more than one or two clicks,
you’ll want to read my series on web mistakes right away. It
includes detailed instructions on improving your online
results.
Here are the links you need:
Copy tip: “Woman without her man is nothing”
I’ll bet this headline got your attention. It’s a prime
example of how punctuation can change everything about your
copy…so you should take special care to do it right.
Take another look at the headline:
Woman without her man is
nothing
How would you punctuate this? Can you figure out how a
simple change in punctuation would dramatically change its
meaning? You’ll find the solution by following this rule…
Punctuation Rule #1: Use commas,
colons and semicolons appropriately.
Because commas create a pause in your copy, they are used
sparingly in direct response marketing. Leaving out commas
keeps the copy flowing and pulls the reader along.
At times, however, a long sentence without commas can feel
exhausting. In these cases, it’s wise to use commas or break
the text up into short, punchy sentences.
So back to our headline. Are you stumped? Here’s the
solution:
Woman, without her man, is
nothing.
Woman: without her, man is
nothing!
Now there is undeniable proof that punctuation can change
everything. Stay tuned for more punctuation rules in the next
issue of Direct Marketing
Update.
Testing corner: Which thank-you email worked
best?
Keeping in touch with your customers and expressing your
appreciation should be at the top of your to-do list, now that
this down economy has sparked such fierce competition.
Many marketers accomplish this by offering a discount for
future purchases in their thank-you emails.
Here’s how a large florist with an online presence
decided to test their approach:
Subject line A: Thank You for Making Us
Your Florist of Choice
Subject line B: 15% Off—Our Way of Saying
Thank You!
The results might surprise you. The opening rate for
subject line A was 25% higher than B’s…even though the offer
wasn’t mentioned. But that’s not all you need to know.
When it came to click-through rates and sales, subject line
B outperformed A quite well. Here’s a breakdown:
| |
Subject line A |
Subject line B |
Relative Difference |
| Unique click-throughs: |
10.11% |
16.21% |
60.34% |
| Sales amount |
$4,717 |
$7,637 |
56.18% |
Why do you think B beat A? Email your thoughts to craig@cdmginc.com. I’ll share some reader
responses in the next issue.
(Be sure to check out the sidebar for reader responses to
our last Testing corner!)
Action Items
- Email me if you’ll be in Las
Vegas on July 9–11. I look forward to
meeting DMU readers when I’m out
on the road, and this time I’ll be speaking at
FreedomFest in Vegas. I’ll also be visiting
the Natural Marketplace convention, taking
place at the same time. If you’ll be in the area and would
like to meet up, email me at craig@cdmginc.com or call
310-212-5727.
- Click here to check out my Essential
Direct Response Booklist. You’ll find my old
favorites as well as some newly published materials.
- Examine the results of your
last marketing campaign. Are you experiencing
a loss of leads or sales? I can help you with your direct
mail, TV or radio, website, email, banner ads—your entire
marketing campaign. Contact me at craig@cdmginc.com.
Yours for direct
marketing success,
 Craig A.
Huey President Creative Direct Marketing Group,
Inc. email: craig@cdmginc.com phone:
310-212-5727 http://www.cdmginc.com/
Click here to visit the
Direct Response Library. You’ll find
numerous articles from past issues of my Direct
Response newsletters that provide even more
valuable direct marketing help.
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About Craig
Huey

Craig Huey is the #1 authority on accountable
advertising.
He's recognized as one of the top direct response marketing
experts in the nation.
In addition to publishing Direct Marketing
Update and the industry newsletter,
Direct Response, Mr. Huey is
president of Creative Direct Marketing Group, Inc., a
full-service direct response advertising agency, and InfoMat,
Inc., a postal and email list brokerage and management
company.
Email Craig at craig@cdmginc.com.
Now appearing in Las Vegas…Craig
Huey!
Craig is on the road again, presenting direct marketing
seminars across the country. He’s headed back to sunny
Las Vegas for FreedomFest,
July 9–11.
He will also be attending the Natural Marketplace
2009 trade show and convention taking place in Vegas
at the same time.
If you’ll be in the area and would like to meet up, just
call the CDMG office at 310-212-5727 and ask
for Deborah at Ext. 117. She'll set you up with a free
marketing critique or consultation.
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Direct marketing quick tip:
Do the new USPS
tabbing requirements affect you?
The USPS is changing its tabbing requirements for
letter-sized booklets as of September 10, 2009.
Any letter-size booklets that do not meet the new standards
will be considered nonmachinables…and there will be a hefty
surcharge that could increase your cost per piece by
94%.
If you need help reformatting your piece, call upon my
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Readers respond to last issue’s
Testing corner
In our last full issue, we looked at a very interesting
website makeover. Click here to see the
test.
Here’s what
readers had to say about the results…
Showed more product
“Because it showed more product at a glance without the
need to click!
“Regards,”
—A.W.
Visual navigation “Craig, B won because it
offers better visual navigation to the consumer. Category
bars, images, brief descriptions.”
—R.S.
Precise and formatted
“Layout B is more precise and formatted to the eye. By
conforming the products in columns we as readers of the site
have a better view as well as a better site.”
—T.G.
Don’t forget to send in your reaction to this
week’s test: Email me at craig@cdmginc.com.
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