June 30, 2009
Direct Marketing Update
Creative Direct Marketing Group, Inc.
310-212-5727 craig@cdmginc.com
Nobody knows direct marketing better!

Dear Direct Marketing Friend,

Let me give you some new marketing tips to increase your leads and sales…

In this issue…

Direct mail reality check

When I write or critique a direct mail program, I find it helpful to follow tested and proven copy formulas to create a winning campaign. You should check your direct mail now and see if they match any of these response-boosting guidelines.

For now, let’s take a look at just 2 useful copywriting formulas…

  1. AIDA: Attention, Interest, Desire, Action. It works because it keeps you focused on the final goal: Prompting your reader to act.

    • Grab attention with a personal, benefit-driven headline.
    • Now that you’ve got their attention, what you say next is critical. You must create interest to keep them reading. Help them quickly identify that your message is relevant.
    • To build desire, use your strongest benefit-driven selling points to appeal to your prospects’ needs and wants.
    • Get that response with a strong call to action. Clearly state what you want your prospects to do. For example: “Call 1-800-XXX-XXXX to get your free recession-fighting report” or “Return this Special Savings Certificate in the postage-paid envelope today to begin your FREE no-risk, 30-day trial.”
  2. AIDPPC: Attention, Interest, Description, Persuasion, Proof, Close. This variation on AIDA was developed by copywriting great Robert Collier, outlining his take on a winning formula.

    • After you’ve got attention and interest, your curious prospect will want a full description of what you’re offering. This is like the bait. Show your readers how this offer will improve their lives, and…
    • Persuasion goes beyond simply presenting interesting information. You must convince prospects that it’s in their best interest to respond to your offer.
    • After you’ve made your claims, provide proof. Today’s skeptical prospects demand that you prove your statements. Back up your sales pitch with cold, hard facts and testimonials.
    • Close. Summarize the benefits and the offer and pair that with your call to action. If you’ve done it right, you’ll be on your way to a sales boost.

Mr. Collier used this primarily for the development of sales letters, which we discussed in our last issue. (Click here to read the article.)

If your marketing doesn’t measure up to these response-boosting formulas, you’re losing leads and sales. If you’d like me to help you get better results, email me at craig@cdmginc.com or call me at 310-212-5727.

Stay tuned for more formulas in our next full issue of Direct Marketing Update.

Recession survival tip: Build real value into your loyalty program

This recession has launched price wars in some industries (like the airlines, for example). Many other businesses are suffering from dramatic cuts in consumer spending. Many more struggle with declining brand loyalty to others.

But there are some smart marketers out there who are still finding ways to compete.

Loyalty programs have been one of the most successful tactics. For example, although Talbots Inc. has faced trouble with some brands in this economy, its Talbots Classic Awards program could be a bright spot.

The program helped significantly increase spending on the store’s branded credit card. In 2000, it was responsible for 28% of total sales—a number that grew as the program took off, reaching 46% by 2008. Now, the company is launching a new tiered program to increase customer engagement and gather more data on its members.

U.S. households have an average of 14.1 loyalty memberships but are only active in about half of those. This proves that you have to do more than get a sign-up—you have to offer rewards that are actually valuable and somewhat attainable to your customer.

If you don’t have a clue about how to start a loyalty program, the first step is to decide how many dollars must be spent to receive a percentage-off coupon or a flat discount. You can simplify the bookkeeping by awarding 1 point per dollar spent.

Learn more about loyalty programs (and what you can learn from your program’s members) in my next issue of Direct Response newsletter. Not a subscriber? Click here to sign up now.

Web strategy: The world’s easiest upsell strategy—that actually works

If you want to boost your average ticket sale—and, really, who doesn’t—you need to use this easy upsell strategy on your shopping cart.

The easiest upsell strategy you’ll ever find is this…Structure your offer into three parts: Best Deal, Great Deal and Good Deal.

Take a look at this example:

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Another easy fix is to add the word “Recommended” next to your Best Deal or paired with other products that you want to highlight. My testing has shown that people respond to this one powerful word.

a sidebar of recommended products

Take a look at this next example on the right, which is from a website for motorcycle enthusiasts. This screen shot was taken from the women’s apparel page, where shoppers will see a sidebar of recommended products like this.

So much of your online sales success is dictated by the shopping cart. If you’re a regular Direct Marketing Update reader, you probably already know that streamlining your checkout process will give you a significant sales boost.

But if your checkout takes more than one or two clicks, you’ll want to read my series on web mistakes right away. It includes detailed instructions on improving your online results.

Here are the links you need:

Copy tip: “Woman without her man is nothing”

I’ll bet this headline got your attention. It’s a prime example of how punctuation can change everything about your copy…so you should take special care to do it right.

Take another look at the headline:

Woman without her man is nothing

How would you punctuate this? Can you figure out how a simple change in punctuation would dramatically change its meaning? You’ll find the solution by following this rule…

Punctuation Rule #1: Use commas, colons and semicolons appropriately.

Because commas create a pause in your copy, they are used sparingly in direct response marketing. Leaving out commas keeps the copy flowing and pulls the reader along.

At times, however, a long sentence without commas can feel exhausting. In these cases, it’s wise to use commas or break the text up into short, punchy sentences.

So back to our headline. Are you stumped? Here’s the solution:

Woman, without her man, is nothing.

Woman: without her, man is nothing!

Now there is undeniable proof that punctuation can change everything. Stay tuned for more punctuation rules in the next issue of Direct Marketing Update.

Testing corner: Which thank-you email worked best?

Keeping in touch with your customers and expressing your appreciation should be at the top of your to-do list, now that this down economy has sparked such fierce competition.

Many marketers accomplish this by offering a discount for future purchases in their thank-you emails.

Here’s how a large florist with an online presence decided to test their approach:

Subject line A: Thank You for Making Us Your Florist of Choice

Subject line B: 15% Off—Our Way of Saying Thank You!

Which thank-you email worked best?

The results might surprise you. The opening rate for subject line A was 25% higher than B’s…even though the offer wasn’t mentioned. But that’s not all you need to know.

When it came to click-through rates and sales, subject line B outperformed A quite well. Here’s a breakdown:

  Subject line A Subject line B Relative Difference
Unique click-throughs: 10.11% 16.21% 60.34%
Sales amount $4,717 $7,637 56.18%

Why do you think B beat A? Email your thoughts to craig@cdmginc.com. I’ll share some reader responses in the next issue.

(Be sure to check out the sidebar for reader responses to our last Testing corner!)

Action Items

  1. Email me if you’ll be in Las Vegas on July 9–11. I look forward to meeting DMU readers when I’m out on the road, and this time I’ll be speaking at FreedomFest in Vegas. I’ll also be visiting the Natural Marketplace convention, taking place at the same time. If you’ll be in the area and would like to meet up, email me at craig@cdmginc.com or call 310-212-5727.
  2. Click here to check out my Essential Direct Response Booklist. You’ll find my old favorites as well as some newly published materials.
  3. Examine the results of your last marketing campaign. Are you experiencing a loss of leads or sales? I can help you with your direct mail, TV or radio, website, email, banner ads—your entire marketing campaign. Contact me at craig@cdmginc.com.

Yours for direct marketing success,

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Craig A. Huey
President
Creative Direct Marketing Group, Inc.
email: craig@cdmginc.com
phone: 310-212-5727
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Craig Huey

Craig Huey is the #1 authority on accountable advertising.

He's recognized as one of the top direct response marketing experts in the nation.

In addition to publishing Direct Marketing Update and the industry newsletter, Direct Response, Mr. Huey is president of Creative Direct Marketing Group, Inc., a full-service direct response advertising agency, and InfoMat, Inc., a postal and email list brokerage and management company.

Email Craig at craig@cdmginc.com.

Now appearing in Las Vegas…Craig Huey!

Craig is on the road again, presenting direct marketing seminars across the country. He’s headed back to sunny Las Vegas for FreedomFest, July 9–11.

He will also be attending the Natural Marketplace 2009 trade show and convention taking place in Vegas at the same time.

If you’ll be in the area and would like to meet up, just call the CDMG office at 310-212-5727 and ask for Deborah at Ext. 117. She'll set you up with a free marketing critique or consultation.

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Direct marketing quick tip:

Do the new USPS tabbing requirements affect you?

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The USPS is changing its tabbing requirements for letter-sized booklets as of September 10, 2009.

Any letter-size booklets that do not meet the new standards will be considered nonmachinables…and there will be a hefty surcharge that could increase your cost per piece by 94%.

If you need help reformatting your piece, call upon my staff’s printing and mailing expertise. Email me at craig@cdmginc.com.

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Readers respond to last issue’s Testing corner

In our last full issue, we looked at a very interesting website makeover. Click here to see the test.

Here’s what readers had to say about the results…

Showed more product

“Because it showed more product at a glance without the need to click!

“Regards,”

—A.W.

Visual navigation

“Craig, B won because it offers better visual navigation to the consumer. Category bars, images, brief descriptions.”

—R.S.

Precise and formatted

“Layout B is more precise and formatted to the eye. By conforming the products in columns we as readers of the site have a better view as well as a better site.”

—T.G.

Don’t forget to send in your reaction to this week’s test: Email me at craig@cdmginc.com.

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